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ALL DREAMS DON'T COME TRUE

Last night
I was half asleep
singing my new songling
poem

O Maria Maria Maria
I was doggy tired
@81 old age
could not come out of my cage
O what a midnight rage
my dreams kept me engaged
now I can't recall
those words which come
if at all like a rainbow
from a distant horizon
blind eyes cant see

Will one day a Milton I be
or deaf as Beethoven was they say
composed musical poems all day
was maestro of his day

Deaf as me may be
one day
Lord Byron
Milton Beethoven or Wordsworth
I could be

Shakespeare is to the world so dear
him furious I won't like to see

But Robert Frost
I could be
frozen as ice is in Iceland
yet most say
Pablo's duplicate
Ah!
what an exceptional sign of glee
for me

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

This is really special and so lovely to read. From a distant horizon? Instead of distance? Just a thought.

You are all you have spoken of and more, you have the most unique talent that i most enjoy, your ending is really wonderful.

Thank you...Teddy

Hi, Lovedly,
You are correct - not all dreams come true. Many times they take a detour. This is a very energetic poem, full of anticipation and desire. I noticed the word 'songling'. I'm not familiar with this word, but I really like it!
Thank you!
L

beautifuller ==a boy as beautiful as her
muchly== much ado about much=many
soonly why soon sooner soonest------- just say soonly..... modify the English
Hope you know
Shakespeare also did so
all poets must grow then glow

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I like it muchly!
L

u hve created
poetree
fairingly haha

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