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All Alone Prima Poetry stage 2

alone in the darkness
thick forest
on an empty trail...

A cabin overgrown
a little girl
this grassy town...

beyond the prairie
open field
Darkness falls...

a path through the trees
dark blue skies
light came forth
the end of the grassy road...

a light brighter than day
opened the way
to leave the woods...

into the expanse
the cosmos
from whence I came...

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made me feel as though I were alongside you watching the night turn to day! Geezer.
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glad for the invitation..to do something knew and fun

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glad for the invitation..to do something knew and fun

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i can see you alongside me watching in my minds eye..

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cheers,
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I have read both parts, these two could be expanded
Take the thoughts and walk with them to another level, Yours as always Ian xx

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