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Aliens dream

Let’s get down there as fast as we can
Save these ugly humans, we have a good plan
the things we can see and smell from up here
earth could be saved, such a glorious sphere
they forgot how to love earth, and only love cash
greed a plenty and far too much trash
the oceans they suffer, plastic afloat
fat men laughing from their yachts and boats
we will save the planet and then they will see
aliens friendly and always will be…

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Very well said. ~ Geezer.
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Thank you! I'm thrilled that you love it.

Thank you...Teddy

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what a cncept well done
If only

Let your mercy spill on all those
burning hearts in hell( L.Cohen)

Thanks so much this is the second one that was inspired by the May competition So i am so grateful.

Thank you...Teddy

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Thanks so much this is the second one that was inspired by the May competition So i am so grateful.

Thank you...Teddy

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Hi Teddy, I'm sure some aliens are far better than us, as you say in your good, rhyming poem. We certainly need saving, the devastation humanity has caused is a disaster. With this lockdown, nature is regaining some of her beauty and health.
I'm glad you posted this poem, it is a good candidate for the May contest. All the best!

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"The very existence of libraries affords the best evidence that we may yet have hope for the future of man." T.S. Eliot, from The Wasteland.

I didn't enter in the competition I tried with two poems but I need to understand how to do it. I'm not smart with key board's. Next time. But thanks for the encouragement and I'm thrilled you liked it.

Thank you...Teddy

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