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ain't no sonnet.....

you are a lovely sonneteer
the only thing about sonnets
I know is
that there are 14 lines,
last two must do a twist,
someone must read at least
lines of only five syllables,
stressed,
somehow that's all I know
about sonnet composing
my maiden one was laughed off
as free verse one
my own sense of creativity,
as on my broken down car’s bonnet
I sit composing a sonnet
hope they will laugh once again
but then this ain't
no sonnet
thanks friend

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10 years old, playing the king, I tripped over my cape and fell flat on my face.
Everyone laughed.
To this day I can not step on a stage, even to read my poetry, without shaking like a jackhammer.
That was something I never got over. I even did therapy.

But writing poetry is different, my dear Loved, our mistakes are our gains.

I have judged you hard, and others will, but the poet transforms the cape to a jape,
then tries again.

You have noticed my poetic absence for nearly two years? Many considered me a fine poet before that. I'm learning to be grateful for the cape, the tripping over it, the lines missed and the lines gained.

And I think I see you doing it too.

Much love,

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

if people laughed at us
take it well,
at least they have an occasion to do so,
else, they would dwell in sentimental ignorance.
take each step with care,
if you must
I read others crap and then add my own to that
so that the garbage bag is full,...
at least some satisfaction
nothing is empty.
I follow your footsteps
my master,
my maker

that you still read me
is in itself an honour
that we all can see.

loved

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in poetry too,
take it its me...

loved

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the jester is traditionally the dispenser of unwelcome wisdom,
but wisdom none the less.

You above all know that I never give flattery and I tell you truly your work is growing in my esteem.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

that's exactly
what you now so do
and
for that only
I appreciate you.
have a nice day
I just woke up by the way
its darkness outside
but now not within.
Thanks Jess.

loved

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Those sonnets ARE a pain in the butt lol. Not so much maintaining form, but trying to keep a natural sounding flow in them (at least to me). By the way, I'm the only one allowed to say ain't and ya'll here lmao.........stan

you know - practice makes perfect they say....

and you never did work on the second verse of your sonnet - so how will you ever get to write one if you don't try?...

love judy
xxxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

soon learn to do so
and
honour your time devoted
please bear with me

loved

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The great Bard is laughing and I hear him,
though we are 60 miles from his home,
you know he died, and is free to roam,
I hope that he will visit you,
to show you a sonnet true.
But you need to think
and see things through.
It is to work you must go
and write a sonnet just so...
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

EH !YOU !
LISTEN TO ME..ok ok no shouting...
OK
do as u will
I too in my time did....
create a newer sonnet if you will .
but laugh at you I shall still...
till....
a PROPER sonnet of 14 lines
you can properly till.

else I may wish to
well you know
KILL

loved

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I have never written a sonnet in my life and I aint gonna start now lol,
Take care young Bard have a great day for Sunday,
Yours, Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Sunday
sonnet shall mate

loved

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