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Ah, atrocity!!

to modify the scene
I'd crop the swine
I'd always photoshop
for a cleaner Palestine

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Short and yet the message speaks out loudly.

Priceless blood of your men,
Stained the holy ground here
Sing the song of joy, dear
Blessed be them in glory!
Souls departing, heavens waiting.

Alid

for the encouraging words.

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Good change in Title Rula. I note you are beginning to express more and more about your love and pride about Palestine...

Regards,

raj (sublime_ocean)

for your visit and the comment.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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