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After All ...A memorable moment in Time
After all the times passed by
today we gather at the River of life
to immerse our thoughts and visions
of our long time association
Rest in eternal peace
that's all we can wish
today as always
we shall you miss
may life where ever you be
prove to be bliss
Our Dearest
most loved one
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
When Dear ones pass away...........
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-02-04 17:05
It’s as simple as that really
“It’s the same story the crow told me
It’s the only one he knows
Like the morning sun we come
and like the wind we go
Ain’t no time to hate
Barely time to wait
Woah oh what I want to know oh
Where does the time go”
R.Hunter
My fave poet
Tim
lovedly
Sun, 2023-02-05 05:22
OK
R AAAAAAAAAAAA
TNX
Lavender
Sat, 2023-02-04 18:50
After All...
Aw, Lovedly,
You've said it all, and very well.
Lav
lovedly
Sat, 2023-02-04 23:16
Thanks and
many thanks Lav....
Seren
Sun, 2023-02-05 11:49
Loved
This is some of your best work.
Poignant and simple in its beauty.
Love & hugs Sis xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Sun, 2023-02-05 12:01
kindness
Seren sis...
Geezer
Sun, 2023-02-05 13:07
Though we may...
never penetrate the veil between this plane and the one after death, we can at least wish our loved ones well on their incomprehensible journey. Who knows? They may be out there laughing at our feeble attempts to stave off the inevitable
end to live in a body racked with disease, infirmity for just a few more years, because we are afraid of the unknown.
Your thoughts are always here with me, and I wonder. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2023-02-05 13:14
GEE
You are the bestest friend of me
lovedly..thank ye
believe only on ye
never me
I am like an alien
for all Earthly human
human's unlike me
lol
Geezer
Sun, 2023-02-05 13:51
I must...
attract aliens! My friend Bob, always said that he was an alien, and I can think of a few more that are certainly in that category.
~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2023-02-05 14:04
Gee
then also add
lovedly
will ye
lol