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Adam and Eve in Modern Times

Adam, my heart be broken
I fell upon your love
You fell upon mine, so it seemed

Two important lovers
Entwined forever
In a Myth

It was you who wanted me gone, you Bastard
You gave me the drink
I thought it was a Spritz

Alas, we are both still here
I’m not speaking to you anymore
We’ll never be famous now
Maybe just on facebook?

The end.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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What did you think of my title?
Last few words: 
LOL well i just couldn't resist this bit of fun. I do know the true story but i like to mix it up. please forgive the *B* word only for creative purpose it has been used
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

LMAO!!!

*grins, Cat
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When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

Lol I seem to always have that effect on you dear Cat, it truly warms my heart to hear you laugh
Also to know you enjoy my work.

Thank you...Teddy

author comment

I like this, it gives one a different point of view. I wonder what it would be like? LMAO! Funny stuff. ~ Geez.
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Did you spike my spritz? LOL

Thank you...Teddy

author comment

Not me! It was the snake! ~ Geez.
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