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acceptence (prose)
Indigo children, running on a molten river of emotionless hate.
Driven forwards only by the tumult that we fools call love.
Compelled only to be accepted into a perfect circle.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
I have a couple of rough drafts for verses two and three, will upload over the next week or so.
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Comments
Candlewitch
Wed, 2012-01-11 11:18
Hello silent_voice
This is more a piece of prose rather than poetry. But since we don't have a selection for prose, you might want to put it in your title, like this:
Acceptence (prose)
I recently did that with my latest piece, titled: Brave Hearts (prose) as someone rightly pointed out to me that it wasn't poetry. You can click on my name, Candlewitch, to get to my page.
I really like your opening line:
Indigo children, running on a molten river of emotionless hate.
it is very descriptive and full of emotion and dark imagery. I love dark works and write mine under the name of eddy styx (in the title of my poems) I look forward to reading more of your work.
Again, welcome to the site.
always, Cat
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