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acceptence (prose)

Indigo children, running on a molten river of emotionless hate.
Driven forwards only by the tumult that we fools call love.
Compelled only to be accepted into a perfect circle.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I have a couple of rough drafts for verses two and three, will upload over the next week or so.
Editing stage: 

Comments

This is more a piece of prose rather than poetry. But since we don't have a selection for prose, you might want to put it in your title, like this:

Acceptence (prose)

I recently did that with my latest piece, titled: Brave Hearts (prose) as someone rightly pointed out to me that it wasn't poetry. You can click on my name, Candlewitch, to get to my page.

I really like your opening line:

Indigo children, running on a molten river of emotionless hate.

it is very descriptive and full of emotion and dark imagery. I love dark works and write mine under the name of eddy styx (in the title of my poems) I look forward to reading more of your work.

Again, welcome to the site.

always, Cat

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