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Absurdly Heaven...

Absurdly Heaven….

I don’t think heaven’s myth can survive
anymore, where in hell’s name do all the
souls fit
I want a bit of equality to argue the score,
such as asteroids, could they really just be
angel’s shit?
You think I’m just fooling, but I’ll tell you
there’s more questions still to come, like
a black hole would it matter if it was your
god’s holy bum.
Imagine the disbelief if people were told one
day the world would end, by colliding with an
ancestral turd? then to descend,
into that rarest end, a god’s almighty hellish
holy hole.

Do you think they’d still be killing in his name??

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Do you think i'll get to heaven now?
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Will you get to heaven- now?
Would you before- should it exist-
one atom's worth of godly hall?
Angels, demons, dragons and - myth made real-
god burnt witches, in thy name,
'thou shalt do and thou shalt not'
mad father, cartoon dad.
Belief killed millions, burnt earth, destroyed.
Rage about that - I am on your side.
God dislikes me, pagan hearted whore,
but we will meet, with others, just the same,
when the world dies.


If i was a believer i couldn't enter a church weekly and worship a god who murders millions every hour, i'd have to enter and curse that god and those who worshiped it. I say it because of all the preposterous presumtions made by man, the one that a god would look like us is the worst. Thanks for commenting and giving me the chance to rant. Love Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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