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Above the Sky Poetry Does Fly

Above the sky my poetry flies
over heads standing that high
where even eagles fail to fly

To send my poetry that high
my mortality does die

I recall the past as remembrance
some say reminiscence
at times we humans
really make no sense
elevate those
who promote nonsense

is that the beginning of life
some say 'tis life's substance
concentrated essence
Isn't such a version
sheer nonsense

someone say with confidence
poetry is just sharing virtual emotion

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
After digesting so many meaningless poems this is just an abstract of read nonsense Are we simulated auto poets
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Not Explicit Content

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the parallel spirits joined by the primal elements. This is the lovedly I know and wait to read.
The title is most intriguing.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

glory
you bring to my heart once gory

Now I compose morer poetry
only as you like to read me
you live by a lake
I also

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only not so little. How sad the world would be if there were no lovedly. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

BEYOND THE SKIES YOU PRAISE ME
I STILL AND WILL LIVE
YOUR GOOD WISHES
I LIVE

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would you change a perfectly intriguing title?

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

No one was reading this poem so had to change its dress slightly tho

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The original title piqued my interest much more. The new title basically sums up the whole piece. We should vote to see who wants the new title, or the old title. Anyone else want to weigh in?

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

Scribbler RAY Mark Michael RACE_9TOGO
AND SOME NEW bees ...We could -perhaps have better interaction on
TITLES
Paul may be requested to float his views too.
Thanks to all

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