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9/11 O SUN

The distance tells me
the life of all is now ebbing
to seed afresh more somewhere else
in the distant horizon
East or may be West

the source of life warms our hearts and hearths too
come my loved one again will you
as the mirage of life now clears up
you alone are
our fire
our love
our master
since ages now 'tis clear

you alone are ours O sunny dear
far from the wilderness of human mind
why did you so far from us resign

Now come and keep going too
still we all forever and ever
shall love only you
you alone are a fact true

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Good read. I may go for a period of contemplation in hibernation.

xxxxx

make do
vivoooo

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this is a little bit different than your usual but it is just as wonderful.Its thoughtful. Well done.

Alid

did u not hea I said hiiiiiiiiiiii thanx alidz

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