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9 am.

Nine am, an old suit case
and blue arsed flies.

Read old news again today
poverty is dead
HIP HIP HURRAY !!
a three ringed circus came to play
then Maggie snatched -- our milk away.

Watched two blue arsed flies
doing the Indy 500
around my light bulb.

Drank coffee -- minus milk.

Obi.

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Comments

fun
no pun
milk was none
why shun

morning thoughts. I was wondering if the flies had to make pit-stops?
Lol, funny little work. ~ Geezer.
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A nice slice of life here. All I have to suggest is to change blue arced to blue bottle....for both increased accuracy and a bit of alliteration......stan

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