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'hark my heart stops
stress stalks me
I sweat helplessly....

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Though my heart doth beat strongly
Your words fell short as title displayed
If thou doth require correction
Pray take to you my words:-

Hark my heart doth stop
stress stalks me on silent wings
I sweat helplessly.

Love to our one Loved
That he should toil unaided
When our help is nigh,

Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

tis best to traverse
on known sands
than walk across drier grass ...
I shall limit to my hall of fame
lest I earn greater ...defame

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lovely mingling

we mingle to gingle

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Loved this from both of you dear friends.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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I can relate to that.

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