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2 day.. is yesterdays---- tomorrow

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2016-01-22 14:29

2 day two morrow

today ur here......tomorrow u will be there .
...today you r into her.... tomorrow she won't be near.... so lie in her and endear.... why fear.... tomorrow will come ....do you hear .... but it will be another today ....so in side ur lover's heart do stay.... tomorrow is coming don't sway...... have a hay day ..be gay if you may. as of ..today..... for tomorrow you may for her pray ....so don't dismay ,,she will go far away...today is yesterday's tomorrow.... all say...you may love to follow.... O poet yes u may

a rambler poem for a guy
who did for is lover cry
when birds fly
only then we try
ere they catch
the corners of our eye
they F L Y
NO ONE knows
why

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Fri, 2016-01-22 16:09

Esker's picture

the intuition arriving and the Lovedly wit
and barb
it reminds me of the days of the street beat
the corner prophets
of all seasons

thank U!

lovedly

Fri, 2016-01-22 16:24

lovedly's picture

Yes Dear Esker Sir reading you I endear and see

A Canadien poet so near
riding high above the Canadien snow
driven sky
above the sky so high
so as to reach you
one would need a flexible ladder
yet I view sitting in Ontario outside the Museum or zoo
seeing the likes of me ... in you
you find so few

I have evolved ...only because of you

I once saw a guy sleeping on the bench
on the beach shore here
I imagined twas you
then I hadn't known
Esker who?

Now my mind floats like the missile of the NASA’s guide
one day they will take me for a ride
my life astride
the momentum you speak of
comes from with in
not as much as from your eyes
which screen
Earth and heaven all between

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