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Vertebrae
suspense
twisting like a bandage

your voice
buried in sleep
escapes with its key
unclasping locks

hushing forth
a moist jaunt

while further
farther the giant dream
stirs
and black mice
chase freedoms
frieze
down a mazes mirth

romance
dripped throttled flame
drown molten
amused

dead flowers
and day old
smiles
limp in the
mirrors
lucid
lure

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Comments

I...was...here, and left a small part of myself behind, this one spoke to me hun

wow...

nice to read you again

love Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

good use of imagery like in verse 1 describing a lack of sleep

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