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There is a perfect angle
at which the bottom
of the left tit

meets the
rib cage of your woman

and its
the square root of two.

Obi.

Last few words: 
the spacing and lack of punctuation is an attempt at slowing down the reading of this piece, possibly propping up the lack of "actual poetry", LOL.
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Comments

Yep! That looks about right...
With all properties properly in place hmm a right triangle
BUT
positive or negative lol Man's great risk!
Teehee

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I can see that you're an aficionado of mathematics and the womanly wherewithals, Mark.
God bless 'em,,,,,,,, mathematics that is!

obi.

author comment

I like that most women are parts of circles tho.
Quite the works of art..
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