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Do you want us to continue live readings of your work?

Chris (vandiemenspeak) Hall and myself are happy to do them for you or teach you how to do it yourself.
Many people have found it invaluable in hearing their voice in another's voice purely to improve their work.

Yet we have got very little feedback. There is quite a lot of work involved which we are happy to do if you get value from it,

We would love some feedback on this, please.

Comments

by me

or fine to continue?
Have you got any value from the readings?
Really man, it is a labour of love but is it of any value to you?

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

author comment

misplaced stresses is a LOT of help. At the same time I think that a writer doing their own reading might show how the poem could sound with just minor misplaced stress points

Live readings are of great use to all poets, keep up the great work you do,
Yours, Ian.

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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

Would you prefer to learn how to do it yourself does it help hearing your work in another voice?

Or both?

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

author comment

I certainly agree that listening to a poem, especially when done by the experts with good tonal voice and modulation adds another dimension to a poem ...it also helps identify glitches and work on them to improve cadence...

I appreciate efforts being made by you and Chris Hall...

regards..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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