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Eeeek! My suspension of disbelief is failing

Eeeek!
My suspension of disbelief is failing. It's a fucking nightmare. I see the strings on Superman. Every plot idiocy goes clunk.
Cliched lines torment me. My dreams are re-hashes of old plots.
It's come to this.
I'm going to have to create something. [shudders]

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read a poem about seeing the lines which suspend belief. Why not try that?

Coleridge

cheers,
Jess
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the entire phrase is "willing suspension of disbelief"......but that's being picky lol

on both points [smiles]

cheers,
Jess
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I did not know that. I believe. There are no strings on you.

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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perhaps a few flies.

cheers,
Jess
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whatever you choose to write about...I know it will be entertaining. how could it not, for it will come from the essence and spark of weirdelf!

*hugs, Cat & eddy styx

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you know the best part? I don't have to try.
I have perfected a lifestyle of indulgence, laziness and pleasure.
I write what I want, when I want to, work when I want to, indulge whatever I can afford.
Life is beautiful.

cheers,
Jess
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