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my love

a spiritual being
surrounded by your aura

the intensity of emotions
we go through the motions

integrity and honesty
the way that it should be

more than i could ever ask for
saving my heart from becoming sore

making love in another realm
sprouting roots like an elm

you are my addiction
without you, life is fiction

you’ve changed me in ways that no one else could

taught me love, constantly use consent, respect my body, and you’ve always taken are of me

unrealistic
i’ve been told my expectations for a spouse are unrealistic
yet you have gone beyond my expectations

showed me unconditional love
and i never saw it coming

Comments

Well the title is one which I suspect most people use at least once. I know I did lol. But your poem is quite different than mine although it also expresses deep feelings. Holler if you have questions about site.

I really like your lines: "I have been told that my expectations for a spouse are unrealistic,
yet you have gone beyond my expectations".
"Showed me unconditional love
and I never saw it coming. Nice stuff! Welcome to Neo. Give us more of this. ~ Geezer.
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