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Edits..

I have a backlog of poetry to edit so I will be starting to edit in the next few days I will try not to flood the site activity and keep it to a couple a day...If it annoys please don't hesitate to let me know

Jayne x

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Keep annoying ..lol..

raj (sublime_ocean)

LOL I try NOT to annoy...

Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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I had said it in good humor. I know you can't annoy :) Good to see you back, hopefully recovered from the food poisoning episode...

take care..

raj (sublime_ocean)

he he and why I laughed, I can annoy though I am sometimes a perfectionist that is never satisfied, that happens a lot, I am only just crawling out of bed tonight the food poisoning really took the wind out of me but I am feeling much better tonight thanks

big hugs Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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thus the deluge is avoided.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Good idea ...

Cheers Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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it will be like a JC retrospective.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

I have been working on new and old poems, going back I have noticed things that should have stuck out like sore thumbs but for some reason I was blind to them...maybe inexperienced ?

cheers Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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is often a case of 10 gangrenous thumbs rather than a dencrorubbable thob or two but medical and poetic sciences have made great break-thoughs, as have you!

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Ok what does dencrorubbable mean ???...its nearly1.30am an my brain wont compute hmmmm

Jayne... I sort of have an idea but I am probably wayyyyy off

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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you know what Dencorub is? The rest follows.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

I occasionally flood the stream with 4-6 edits late at night. When the edit iron is hot, best to strike it lol.........stan

I have fifteen edits ready to go but I wont be doing them all at once so as not to cause havoc in stream

Jayne x

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

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