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May Contest Winner

Please join me in congratulating the winner for the May contest. I'd also like to thank all who entered and express how difficult it was to determine the winner. Way to go Jane! Below is a copy of her excellent poem..........stan

Sonnet to Spring ( May Contest)

The soft gentle warmth of a Spring morning
sees sunshine and sunbeams dapple the trees.
Our season awakes, stretching and yawning,
her fanfare of bird song wafts in the breeze.

On branches, unfurl the sweet tender buds
springing to life after season’s long rest.
A carpet of green rolls out in the woods:
Winter is gone and it’s time to get dressed.

Yet whilst Spring beguiles, teases and tempts us
with promises proffered, gilded with gold,
fey maiden is she, that toys with our trust
the warmth of her smile is cruelly cold.

Throw open your doors and welcome the Spring,
wise men remember she still has a sting.

I have included a voice recording
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0LIu6KXTcj6

Comments

Congratulations! I'm terrible at sonnets so this is a massive feat for me to see. Enjoyed!

Kelsey

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I'm really chuffed.
Jx

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when will I ever
even learn
the basics of sonnetry
I'm solitary

Congrats Jane
Mi'lady
your poetry is
lovely

awaiting the one
from ghostly beaches

Wow, I've won a competition.
Have written my Norfolk ghost poem - Whispering Winds
Hope you like it.
Jx

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Congrats, now I have to find time to go to the Norwegian Fjords as I just came second.
Great work our Jane keep flying the union flag here that is.
Oh and make sure it is flown the correct way up, as this is one of my pet hates lol..
Lovely work, Yours as always Ian xxx

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

I've just seen this, how did you find out you came second?
Jxx

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I love being second as first prize is usually an arrow head,
My second prize this time is a trip to the Fjords in Norway.
This always happens to me, but I have a new passport now and plenty of spaces for customs and immigration stamps.
Enjoy your Arrow Head I will be thinking of you, Yours Ian.T lately known as Sparrow or Yenti xx

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I haven't the faintest idea what you're talking about Ian. Am i being more dense than usual?
Jx

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Not to worry I shall send you a card from Norway when I am there,
Love to all,
Yours Ian.xx

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When I first started contest over a year ago the prize was a quartz Indian arrow head sent to each winner. Actual physical awards have since been abandoned due mainly to cost. And there IS no second place Ian is just kidding around lol......stan

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I was just being dense........ no change there then. Jxw

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You just spoilt it I was going to talk about the necklace I have made from all those arrow heads lol
Loves you all xx

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Thanks ever so much, I'm dead pleased.
Jx

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