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APRIL CONTEST WINNER!
Hello everybody. I'm pleased to announce the winner of the April contest is Mand. I hope all entrants had fun and that everyone will join me in congratulating the winner.
To Tread This Earthly Corridor - ( For April Contest )
Submitted by mand on Mon, 2015-04-06 04:24
The earth is ours, a home to live
a time to take, a time to give.
We wake each morn, some rich, some poor
to tread this earthly corridor.
I fear for us, oh don't you see
how greed pervades humanity
unyielding nations fight in war
to tread this earthly corridor.
In ignorance we'll be bereft
when naked earth is stripped and left
devoid of life with men no more
to tread this earthly corridor.
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Comments
Rula
Fri, 2015-05-01 12:50
congratulations! !
To our sweet winner Mand. Well merited indeed!!!
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raj
Fri, 2015-05-01 13:05
Congratulations Mand
I hope you log in from Portsmouth to know about the result/
raj (sublime_ocean)
alidzain
Fri, 2015-05-01 17:51
Congrtulations, Mand!!
APPLAUSE
Alid
judyanne
Sat, 2015-05-02 06:14
clapping
Congratulations Mand. Well deserved
Love judy
xxx
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shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
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Sparrow
Sat, 2015-05-02 07:19
Mand
Great write and deserves the top place, I will take my well know second place, but I hope it isn't another holiday in Spain.
Well done, and I look forward to May contest when I return from this Spa weekend I have just won for coming Second lol,
Yours as always, Ian
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