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Ars Poetica
from the heart
authenticty
would emerge
to surface
naked emotions
that flow words to touch
the hollow cyber
every now and then.
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Jordan
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Ian.T
Sun, 2013-09-08 02:51
Rula
A space in time, this sounds as if there was a rent in time and the writer fell through only to regain their way again.
I liked it, but would have liked just a few more words(not many) to stitch the tear..
Still liked it a lot, Yours Ian.T
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Rula
Sun, 2013-09-08 03:22
Ian
You've captured the sense well as usual except that I'm trying to be back for writing as many things drift me away.I just feel like a log into rough waves.
Thanks for your kind visit.
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author commentIan.T
Sun, 2013-09-08 09:27
Rula
Just write those things down and they will become a new direction, I think that you are changing your ways of writing, this is where things become blurred, but not for long..
Take care young Lady, Yours Ian.T
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So find more reasons to believe in others..
Rula
Sun, 2013-09-08 14:01
dear Ian
I believe you're right. I am not worried. I'm enjoying my time these days just reading and commenting on others'.
Thank you again.
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author commentEsker
Mon, 2013-09-16 14:03
eight lines
found the workings of the poem well..
good word choices and connect
from beginning to end...
Thank You!