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UNFINISHED BUSINESS
Legitamizing my quality of BULLSHIT CONTROL I come to an epiphany that is a long running repeatedly forgotten consideration that keeps losing its place
Maybe, just maybe I place myself in situations that give only one reasonable explanation to this misfortune of having to castrate the thoughts that seep from my mouth
Giving more thought to this creation of manic reviewal of all that I say brings upon angry visions that doesn't require an audience of such rash meaningless actions but are completely enjoyable playing just for me
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Comments
scribbler
Thu, 2012-04-12 13:31
AAANNNDDD?
what is your epiphany?
Ian.T
Fri, 2012-04-13 02:51
Yes!
Firstly Welcome to Neopoet, and I hope that as you talk and walk with us here through all differing places and feelings your way with words will touch many and they will guide your writing..
When your track has become more clear we will talk more, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
PRECIOUSLYSET1
Fri, 2012-04-13 14:46
I'm not sure what you mean
I'm not sure what you mean when you say " when my track has become more clear" .. I tend to use alot of adjectives in everything I write even if it's a grocery list
Alone we shall find our ways into worlds of never imagined discoveries
author commentIan.T
Sat, 2012-04-14 10:58
Hello again
Yes you use loads of words , I was saying that when you find a way of writing that suits your way then we can constructively critique the pieces.
I mentioned reading others works not mine but the elders of Neo, and some Classics. There are so many super poets out there that you can shadow or find a style that suits you.
Look forward to your next pieces, Yours Ian.T
PS:- I had to smile when I enhanced your pic and found those chop sticks, you have an individual style in looks so lets see that projected in your works.....
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
weirdelf
Fri, 2012-04-13 15:41
Just fortunately,
or perhaps by innate, incorrigible talent, your work does not seem to apply only to yourself, yet, as I have said on your poem SOBER, it needs some work to be generous.
cheers,
Jess
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