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You Honour me more than I Deserve

Follow my style,
If it can please you
Shake up this world,
Of lonely followers...

Time moves on,
So should we too,
Take to the Eagles wings

We don't know
What all Eagles can achieve.
I do hope,
Others will follow soon.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Anna's comment has reminded me of my own better self and conscience.

I wish you all the best in your poetic endeavors while also urging you to strive for quality and improvement instead of quantity.

I know you have written some excellent poems and recognition is a wonderful thing.

Jess, Neopoet Directors
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

Poets are self-indulgent narcissists Jess, get over it. However, we all can improve our art, the more we walk about. Remember how that was, Jess? I do. And I think that's what
Loved is saying here...but I may be wrong, though it's all about being loved, I think.

The dream of it being far more delusional than its reality, which sort of breaks eagles' wings.

lol. and ;-(

Today there are more poets,
than poetry readers
Yes narcissism is a disease ,
we must safeguard against
have a good day alll


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