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For You All Who Know Me
Yeah,
I roam the world
and my cat’s whiskers;
give me the wisdom,
to follow you or any one...
Now I have seen Bombay 17 times
in my life...
ask me where you stay
and,
I will tell,
within
one hundred miles
I maybe wrong
hahahaa.....
I like and
I love
those who love me,
as friends
as I am only love hungry
I eat little
far less than what's needed for my age...
you all are lovely friends of Neopoet
So I love you all
from this far distance
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2011-10-15 02:29
Why are you shouting and repeating yourself?
You've posted this at least 3 times, including in a workshop, shouting in caps.
U is spelt you, except by illiterate adolescents in text messages.
Welcome back.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Sat, 2011-10-15 07:38
My regrets .....not shouting
Repetition overruled
not keeping too well
hence be excused sir.
Thanks for the welcome back
Shall amend when better
Have a good day
loved
weirdelf
Sat, 2011-10-15 07:46
Best wishes and hope you feel better soon,
I always make my worst faux pas here when I'm not well
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Sat, 2011-10-15 11:20
Thy wish is
my command
I have reposted it u
you may now wash off your disgust
Thanks I'.m better now
regards
loved
loved
Fri, 2011-10-21 09:54
Thy wish is deleted
deleted
loved