Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

For You All Who Know Me

Yeah,

I roam the world
and my cat’s whiskers;
give me the wisdom,
to follow you or any one...
Now I have seen Bombay 17 times
in my life...
ask me where you stay
and,
I will tell,
within
one hundred miles
I maybe wrong
hahahaa.....

I like and
I love
those who love me,
as friends
as I am only love hungry
I eat little
far less than what's needed for my age...
you all are lovely friends of Neopoet
So I love you all
from this far distance

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

You've posted this at least 3 times, including in a workshop, shouting in caps.

U is spelt you, except by illiterate adolescents in text messages.

Welcome back.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

Repetition overruled
not keeping too well
hence be excused sir.
Thanks for the welcome back

Shall amend when better
Have a good day

loved

author comment

I always make my worst faux pas here when I'm not well

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

my command

I have reposted it u
you may now wash off your disgust
Thanks I'.m better now
regards

loved

author comment

deleted

loved

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.