Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Wishing

If I could have a single wish
And have that wish come true
I’d wish that we could always be
Together, me and you

I’d wish eternal happiness
A lifetime filled with bliss
To hold you in my arms each night
And feel your tender kiss

Just having you beside me
Is all I that I desire
You are the one I dream of
You set my heart on fire

I’d wish for you because, you know,
I simply can’t resist ya
But, if you don’t stop your moanin’
I’ll be wishing for your sister

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Editing stage: 

Comments

Cheers Eph, think it's been over a year, hasn't it? haven't had much time to do anything for quite a while, hopefully thats changed and I can piss a few people off with my nonsense.

All the best, John

author comment

Hi Rosi, it's nice to hear from you again, Hilaire Belloc used to say " if you can't find a rhyme, make it up, and if that doesn't work then near enough is good enough, a man after my own heart.

John

author comment

YA HOO! Shaz is back!

As usual, you toy with us! lol.

~A

Hi Anna,

it's been a long time, but I've been exceptionally busy for the past eighteen months, think I'm just about back on track now, got a book published earlier this year though (it's on Amazon and it's called "Hidden shallows) I'll see if I can dig some stuff out to post on here now and then.

John

author comment

It is good that you are back...else we would have missed this lovely write....although the last line affects the flow..i perceived it as "even in love there is a blemish"...don't know if i got it right...

raj (sublime_ocean)

I enjoyed this, nearly didn't read it but for your name I scanned it and the last stanza drew me back in.

cheers,
Jess, Neopoet Directors
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

Hi Jess, nice to know you're still about, i'll post a few more as and when I manage to get some free time

John

author comment

I like,I like...especially the last two lines of the last stanza(it left my mouth open for a while there)lol.

(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.