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When
When you are nice,
all are nice,
I have a lions heart ,
open it up
and
you will find ,
a vast bowl
of love and affection.
Love as in love,
not sex,
The usual thing all hanker for,
mine is pure.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
loved
Sun, 2011-10-16 03:32
I have composed countless poems
I have composed countless poems
As you know
Since I have no fixed mind ,
nor fixture of mind,
I am an unique entity...
No two poems of mine are alike,
as i believe in variety
Loved Style,
All my while .
I stand in no row or queue
of recognition ,
as I know twill never come,
when I am alive .
But then it will be too late
POsthumously
which they will.
loved
author commentCandlewitch
Wed, 2011-10-19 10:47
Dear Loved,
I have composed countless poems
As you know
Since I have no fixed mind ,
nor fixture of mind,
I am an unique entity...
No two poems of mine are alike,
as i believe in variety
Loved Style,
All my while .
I stand in no row or queue
of recognition ,
as I know twill never come,
when I am alive .
But then it will be too late
POsthumously
which they will.
loved
I see, in answering Ian, You have composed another poem. Good stuff!
Always, Cat
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Kailashana2
Wed, 2011-10-19 12:21
do you make love?
do you make love?
do you choose the
woman of your dreams
or do you make love
to yourself
these are questions
no dream can ever answer
for the dream is not the
dreamer and the lover
is not love
~A
~A
loved
Fri, 2011-10-21 09:16
To both above
love and dreams are two banks of a river
neither can meet the other
and
eventually we must veer
and meet each other,
across all waters and barriers
and
then you will know,
i do
loved
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