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THE WAITING ROOM

To have or to hold,
to unfold or to be -
live or to die in waiting
or risk the thrill of ecstacy.

sitting in this waiting room
waiting for the fall -
Life has it's own schedule
death knows its time to call

Brush past reception
bolt from the door
rush back into the world -
take uncertainty-as giving more

Mutually exclusive
yet singularly alone
my love for you
acknowledged, recognised
made known

Now this revelation
heralds a change
a shift in priorities
get back 'in the game'

Tell the one you love
Go on and have your say
Set aside prejudices
Carve out a brighter day.

15 July '11

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
ANOTHER ONE FOR THE CLICHES' WORKSHOP!
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Comments

Glad you could take something from it!
Boni

Bonitaj

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Brush past reception
bolt from the door
rush back into the world -
take uncertainty-as giving more

These are the lines that really stood out for me. It reminds me of when I died in the emergency room and was revived. Now I make sure my loved ones know how much I care.

always, Cat

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