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Verbal leakage writing with emotions workshop Re-write
Bullshit, verbal leakage,
you are putrid seepage,
dripping down my mind.
Your a waste, a product of filth
a perverted fornicater
a grubby little gob shite of the worst kind
Bullshit verbal leakage
every time I see you
I feel the need to lobotomise
and lose my tiny mind.
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Region & Country
West London
Favorite Poets
Pablo Neruda, Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics
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lou
Thu, 2011-09-08 09:36
Chyrs
I'm glad that you think so LOL!!
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
author commentCandlewitch
Fri, 2011-09-09 12:32
Dear Lou,
You are sooooo BAD!!! I love it!
always, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lou
Fri, 2011-09-09 12:37
Cat
LOL!! Well it is a hate poem.
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
author commentraj
Fri, 2011-09-09 15:28
whosoever is at the receiving
whosoever is at the receiving end of this ..BEWARE and ...stay outta the way of Lou,....
fun apart..this is powerfully hateful...
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Fri, 2011-09-09 15:30
Andrew
Andrew thank you for getting the button for worjshop critique which hitherto was missing from my page..Lou thank you for referring this snag to Andrew...
raj (sublime_ocean)