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Time Is God!

Let past slumber
In the folds of time
Let another sunrise each time

Afresh,

To bring glory
In the name of God

Whom you call Allah
And
I call Time.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Comments

deviation as times change ,
and when we all come to a full circle
we shall start with
GOOD
and
introduce a TYPO
and call it
GOD...

AMEN

loved

author comment

I almost agree. Unlike Ian, I believe Time does indeed exist, but man will likely never understand precisely what it is. istan

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a man induced concept,
to act as the first computer ,
which keeps a record of times' occurrences ,
in the channels of periods.
. Thanks friend ,
only Istan for you

loved

author comment

though you know I get a nasty little rash at any mention of any names of deities. I agree the poem could use a little expansion and editing.

I'm going to be a complete hypocrite,
and do what I asked you not to do, Loved, link to one of my own poems, my favourite of mine on Time.
http://new.neopoet.com/node/2507
I hope you like it

cheers,
Jess, Neopoet Directors
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