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Thunder
Lightening always precedes sound
It burns all first,
Then we cry a sound of pain,
Where has the fire gone?
Alas all in vain!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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loved
Tue, 2011-08-16 18:16
thanks so be it......
186...... i thought and 1560.... i shall have to refresh
so be it....
fire and sound are nearly twins
separated at birth
betwixt heaven and earth
so does energy
always come first
loved
author commentraj
Tue, 2011-08-16 15:11
Loved...
the essence of your write inspired these
Lightning precedes sound
when clouds burst in agony
deluging tear drops
An out burst of tears
an expression of turmoil
thundering within
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Thu, 2011-08-18 21:38
You My Dear Raj,
You My Dear Raj
You are a poetic deer
I have to scientifically endear,
I do hope you do hear
Albeit
I’d like to from you again hear...
The burst,
The tear,
The clouds,
the crowds
The thunder the clap,
All are
and
shall be enlightened by poetry
Which undoubtedly you bear
And
I dare say
I can ever compare...
loved
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