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That thou sayest deep

That thou sayest deep

Makes me swim
In waters deeper
And
From the soil, they call earth,
Emerge as a vine's creeper
And
Amongst roses, breed myself
And
Bow to you for your courtesy
And
Help...

Let me now vow, to never shirk
To compose poems,
That upon human psyche shall work...

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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... is it not? We all try to write them, but success and failure are never certain and cannot be decided by a vow. Don't worry, your poetry often works on the psyche.
Istan

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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My poetry works

Only on my psyche
They say you have wasted a life time,
Composing beyond 7000 poems …
Who else but you will read them?
And
That too if you have the inkling
Spare us from your poetry,
Still and forever
I shall be composing
As I have lost all tracks of mine a
And my thinking
The CANCER ego of my is now bursting

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"That thou sayest deep"
you will fail
"To compose poems,
That upon human psyche shall work..."

cheers,
Jess, Neopoet Directors
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How TRUE ..
thank you Jess

"That thou sayest deep"

you will fail

"To compose poems,
That upon human psyche shall work..."

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To you more than I do deserve
upon your wishes I serve

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of your exalted capacity ,
Oh my good MASTER ,of critique
do tell me ....

when will i learn to compose poetry?
in this birth ?
and will I be able to create history
or for ever remain
to be a mystery

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and we will flock to you. wesley

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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but this tym tis well taken frnd

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Do you mean "vine's creeper" ? I often find the best received of my scribbles are the ones I don't expect to be read much. So I just write along and hope to blindly stumble upon an acorn on occasion................stan

we ..................................................
and particularly I
emulate you
Yes vines
have I erred???
let me see.... thanks

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