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Test

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Test

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sometimes short is sweet but i feel a complete lack of any effort or style here. the rythm was too short, the N too caght up in th readers reaction, and no alliteration or imagery whatsoever.
Fail.
but if there is a poet on here with the handle 'neopoet' i think that's awesome.

  1. Is there an external or internal conflict
  2. What is the style of the language (is it formal, conversational?)
  3. What poetic devices are used? e.g.
    1. rhyme
    2. meter
    3. assonance, consonance, alliteration

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

  1. How do these poetic devices affect the tone of the poem?
  2. How does the imagery affect the poem
    1. what kinds of imagery are used?
    2. simile
    3. metaphor

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

nada

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

Capital "T" I think is called for, and the only perspective I could see was in the Authors Picture.
Rather bland, Yours Sparrow La La..

PS:- Yenti will be spitting snakes, as this is getting more comments than some of his poems... He-He
Oh! and test is an anagram of stet so I suppose we will have to let it be....

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

test 123

this poem makes me feel "testy"
gives me a zap
and I like that
for the day was dull
but now has zing
for the little poems
that make life ring!!!

Large testes are required
when such a testing poem is sired
so you may at my behest
feel free to run another test

Did we win the last Test ??????,
Yours Sparrow

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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