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A Soldiers Plight
You are absolutely right,
The soldier’s plight
After they fight,
They are left out
In the twilight
Suddenly,
Even out of politician’s sight
Because might is right,
And
The soldier isn't able
To exercise his voice.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
loved
Sat, 2011-09-03 12:33
the end line
has been given a new voice
out of context
hope it will do
won't say twill
as Shakespy....
is shaking cold
below
i'm told
he is fed up of my
twas and tis
and
thinks the last word
is a typo
loved
author commentlovedly
Wed, 2016-02-24 15:31
what a waste of time in neopoet now
what a waste of time in neopoet now
I researched so many poetry
is laying eggs only
and
may be more phantoms may be born
and
may render neopoets forlorn
time is not since going to be long
where has Jess gone