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To Sir, With My Love
I don't mean to hurt anyone here,
Sir.
All my life I have composed
Through the darkness of the eerie nights,
When the mind is free
Without any inhibitions
And
When I read some ones poetry
I get my own vision
And
Compose that's all.
If you don’t like me
At least I thank thee,
For seeing the ray,
Nay,
streak of brilliance
That you do say,
Comes once amongst a billion rays
Many dawns have lapsed,
My lonely pathway
That’s about all what I can say
Have your happy day
As always my
Poetic masters
You will all for ever stay…
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Candlewitch
Fri, 2011-08-26 13:24
Dear Loved,
I enjoyed this piece and I can relate to it. I know I read and comment on some poets post who never respond to me. Maybe they don't like my work, or maybe they are just too busy. But I continue to read them anyways. I know it can be frustrating to go unappreciated. But that is why I really appreciate the ones who do read and comment on my posts. So my advice is to just keep on kepping on.
Iliked these lines:
Many dawns have lapsed,
My lonely pathway
That’s about all what I can say
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
loved
Fri, 2011-08-26 13:36
Thanks Cat
on all the sites
i have visited
i have forced upon them
though with utmostpoliteness.......(one word .....)
to atleast say
Good bad or just something
as it elevates the heart of a poet ,
above the adrenaline level
and its a treattoknow..........one word again....
that ones .... ...are not going down the drain....
thanks
i read urs often
but don't havethewood.....one word again..
to comment
loved
author commentscribbler
Fri, 2011-08-26 17:26
howdy
A good work on reason for writing. Really liked the 2nd stanza.........stan
loved
Fri, 2011-08-26 18:48
Howdy 2222222222222222 uuu22222222222222
u mean this one thanks
All my life I have composed
Through the darkness of the eerie nights,
When the mind is free
Without any inhibitions
loved
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