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Remember Me
Decades have lapsed,
Down memory lane,
Do remember me
When I’m gone,
The sojourn was fraught
With love,
Lost loneliness
Yet twas worth our style
Remember me when I’m gone,
Twill be worth your while…
Memories sure are interminable
Love has always so been,
The finale is a matter ordained,
Come hold me,
Remember me for my good
Bad
Also
When we were happy
And sad
For times a fleeting passing phase,
Only memories do for ever remain,
In this brief life’s domain
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2011-08-10 10:47
Dear Loved,
Lost loneliness
Yet twas worth our style
Remember me when I’m gone,
Twill be worth your while…
Very nicely put together!
always, Cat
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loved
Wed, 2011-08-10 11:39
Cat
your encouragement
brings tears in my eyes ,
a scientist,
you all convert
into a poet
thanks, cat
loved
author commentscribbler
Wed, 2011-08-10 15:03
Hi
We will never be truly gone as long as 1 person remembers us. nice poem...........stan
loved
Wed, 2011-08-10 19:02
nicet to hear from you
since u had a hectic anniversary,
awayfrom us...
thank God Almighty
you return back today,
To continue to play....
loved
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