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Rain of Songs
Rain Of songs..
What force is this that carries a
heart’s intentions into uncertain moments?
could a lover’s attention ever waver afore
a persons unkind comments?. I say in this
state the heart does not stutter but surges
forth scattering all such thoughts of speech
amid the clutter for on this journey there
is a rain of songs and the true heart can
be lifted by notes to heights,
where it belongs..
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Roscoe Lane
Fri, 2011-10-14 17:47
Thank you,
Thank you Jane, your comments are greatly appreciated. Please take care Love Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
author commentRoscoe Lane
Fri, 2011-10-14 17:58
Thank you,
Thank you Lonnie i'm glad you liked this and your comments are high praise indeed. Regards Roscoe...
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
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