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Omo Harmonies

Submitted by Kailashana2 on Tue, 2011-08-16 16:50

there are harmonious things
that appear:
the sun in alignment with the cobble-stoned earth
dreams we grasp in our hands, clay and water
visions,
stones do not speak of sepia deafness,
rites of passage do not wear peacock plumes

we are Omo people, wed to the spirit of earth,
wild flowers,
rivers of devotion.

Every once in a while, I revisit this youtube... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IsYPBRy8ljQ

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Roscoe Lane

Thu, 2011-08-18 04:57

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After my vist to youtube i understand and appreciate this beautiful poem, thank you. Love Roscoe

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

magics02

Thu, 2011-08-18 08:38

Anna I love this the feel, a spirit in a vision nicely done here gal. How have things been for you and have you heard from Theo. Tell him I send him hellos from Mona, Okay. thanks and great work here, short and simple but leaves a mighty punch to the reader (ME)

blessings to you Anna

Mona

Kailashana2

Thu, 2011-08-18 08:43

I think we need to share the beauty that is life, else we get bogged down. We become despondent and loose the inherent joy we are born with.

Thanks for reading, have a wonderful day.

~A

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magics02

Thu, 2011-08-18 14:14

Grazie Bella!!

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