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Naked- Writing with Emotion Workshop

Abrupt intake of idolatry
as softly, languid eyes imbibe
each facet.

You invade reality
stunning my logic,
hooking yourself into my resistance.

The essence of my existence
the crux of it all.
You are woven into every fibre

Impetuous, perilous, sensation
as I expose the delicate under belly,
Naked, open to you.

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Free verse
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well that explains the state of my love life LMAO!!!

Lou

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as though you are trying to describe a liason with someone who just knocks you off your feet with raw sexual power! Not someone you are in love with, but someone whom you cannot resist. I was very taken with the language, the words were all very powerful and yet there was a submissive tone to it. Very satisfiying! ~ Gee

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Then a re-write is in order lol

Thank you

love lou

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I agree a great lust poem. (almost adiction!) I think it has superb emotion and imagery.

Impetuous, perilous, sensation
as I expose the delicate under belly,
Naked, open to you.

love, Cat

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