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The Naked Biker

They call him the naked biker
he streaks from town to town,
teasing all the ladies with his manly frame.

When you hear the engine of a vintage motorbike roar
you can be sure that he is on his way.
So lock up your daughters, cover your eyes today

You have to hope he won't dismount,
and give you the full show.
With his friend John Thomas he might terrorise the town.

They call him the naked biker
He flaunts his butt cheeks far and wide
He's such an exhibitionist you have to run and hide.

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For the Naked Biker, otherwise known as Geezer, with his permission, with much love.
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the naked biker rides
his flag is waving in the breeze
and I wonder where his allegiance is
when he stands at attention.

;-)

~A

I couldn't help but chuckle the second time I read this!

always, Cat

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thank you
love lou

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thought i might have fun with your poem from a male view. i hope you don"t mind. this is what i came up with. I'm not suggesting any changes as your is really good.

She’s called the naked biker
flashing from town to town,
teasing men with her feminine frame.

When you hear the engine of a raw, vintage, motorcycle
be certain she’s coming, so
lock up your son, cover your eyes

Hope she doesn’t descend
giving her full show with friend Peggy Sue, because
she might terrorize the town.

She’s called the naked biker
who flaunts her tits far and wide
a grand diva, run and hide.

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Nice job

Why don't you come up with a poem yourself.

Lou

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i really was just sharing how i thought you poem should in my mind. it was easier to do it this way, rather than try expressing it in normal critique. my mind switch gears on me a lot so i simply go with the flow that it fun.

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No problem, I wasn't offended.

Lou

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i have an extremely sensitive conscience that beats me to a pulp lol

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That should warn those townspeople! It would have been better with the picture! LOL Great fun, Lou. ~ Gee

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I'm glad that you are not offended , love ya loads

Lou

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Glad that you liked it.

lou

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Hmmm now who could this possibly be Lou? I like it and the picture that comes to mind wow what a show the biker gives to all at the parade. lol
Sorry to have missed your chat. Let me know next time okay when you will be hosting the chatting room. Best of wishes also in your new job assignments.

That naked biker is that Geez? Lord knows I will have to interrogate him in the chat room. On the darkside riding a bike stark naked. Hmmmm some daring devil if it is him. Smiles for miles:)

Great day to you Lou

Mona
xox

I can't possibly tell you who the naked biker is, he will tell you i'm sure. LOL!!

Look forward to seeing you at next chat.

Lou

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he or she will? lol

Great write which made me laugh! Even reminded me of some wild times...........

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the mind boggles, do tell LOL!!!!

thanks

Lou

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OMG i like it!!! It gave me an image in my mind like no other poem has, wow i want to see more like this!!!!!!!!!!!.

When reading your poem i had this image in my head of Tom Seleck getting off of a harely and showing his best friend to the world LOL .

this was written as a joke between friends, I'm sure he would be most flattered to be compared to Tom Selleck .

Lou

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