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To madness
on the edge of madness,
away from greedy fingers,
me, an insignificant particle
without a name,
swimming through the doubts
of my existence
even the deadliest sarcasm
wouldn't me
from the eyeless abyss, wide as the night
my hollow eternity splintered
in the heat of the animal,
rise and break, uneducated force
if I reach, you vanish
if I give up, you come
showing the steps of the stars,
wandering through the deep sea of being,
and the ideal, bleeds and bleeds,
like a dying summerday
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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washing tears
Wed, 2011-07-20 01:32
Nevel,
I am enjoying your letters, these lines stuck out to me
"from the eyeless abyss, wide as the night
my hollow eternity splintered
in the heat of the animal,
rise and break, uneducated force"
Great piece of writing here, thank you
-with what love could be...
Washing Tears
Nevel
Sat, 2011-08-27 13:37
Hi Washing Tears,
Hi Washing Tears,
many thanks for your visit and your words, really appreciate then.
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