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linger here

trace me into yourself
before your throbbing
subsides
let the skin of our skin
not separate with its
consuming desire

and
we will have turned to ash

but enter me with a handbook
of poems, take me like a
conquered land, just leave
me with enough sighs
to bask on the island
that separates
us for all eternity,

linger here, my love.

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Forgive me my indulgence today, I had to balance out my rant with a rave. ;-) ~A
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Comments

excellent, really like this poem and that's all I can ask for!
Tim

just one word to sum up my comment "tantalizing"...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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