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Kind of Lingers

The feeling

kind of lingers
kinda lingers
kindalingus

oh yes that feeling

cindalingas
cinallingas
cunnilingus

oh yes!

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
shazbat made me do it.
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Comments

Love the way you play with the words. Very slick and (cunning) Brought a smile to me and a chuckle.

always, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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Yeah, well I knew you'd take the master bait.

;-)

~A

who could resist it?

cheers,
Jess
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author comment

so I guessed the last word
what it would be
And
was the cunning- in -the -less
thatI see your name in my fans list
astonishes me
hope you really mean it
thanks to you
for your oceanic heart
in the deserts of life
i shall remember thee

loved

you do produce some gems.
Thankyou

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet is a workshop. Poets take the time to read and think about your work and offer suggestions.
There is no obligation to make any changes however please acknowledge critique and comments.

author comment

can evaluate
a gem
thank you
for your speediest response
and
teaching me
what I ought to have known
first is no caps
i salute you though
with a cap on...

loved

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