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I MISS MY UNDERWEAR
I MISS MY UNDERWEAR
I miss my suit navy blue
the buttons on my Ralph Laurens
crispy white
the times I could tie my shoe
and the nights my bladder made the loo
most of all I miss
my Calvin Klein underwear
boxers, briefs, high rise, low rise
any kind of rise
Speedos that set hearts reeling
Jockeys with that special feeling.
yet when all is said and done
the packaging may change
but the merchandise is still the same…
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raj
Thu, 2011-08-25 15:52
Geremia
it's true that quite often we develop a bond with even in animate things for varied reasons...the feel...sentiment...superstition....these aspects are thoughtfully brought about in this write...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Geremia
Thu, 2011-08-25 16:28
Yes, and these are things my
Yes, and these are things my illness no longer allows me to enjoy. I tried to approach my "dilemma" a different way in this write,
thank yo u,Raj
author commentraj
Thu, 2011-08-25 16:45
and you did pretty well in
and you did pretty well in this approach to resolve your dillema..
raj (sublime_ocean)
Geremia
Thu, 2011-08-25 21:41
You bet,my friend...and thank
You bet,my friend...and thank you.
joe
author commentGeremia
Fri, 2011-08-26 09:13
Thank the Powers that be that
Thank the Powers that be that there are adult diapers. Besides, when all is said and done, I'm still a handsome son-of-a-gun. :)
Love to you, Rosinella,
Joe
author commentKailashana2
Fri, 2011-08-26 09:24
Depends on the fit. (;-) )
Depends on the fit. (;-) )
Love to you, perhaps you might inspire R.L. signature ..........you could be the spokesmodel.
I'd pay to see that.
~A
Geremia
Fri, 2011-08-26 11:41
Bodabing. Boddaboom....:)
Bodabing. Boddaboom....:)
author commentweirdelf
Sat, 2011-08-27 23:27
Superb!
So glad you have found the humour in the condition. And well written.
My thoughts and care are with you.
cheers,
Jess
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Geremia
Sun, 2011-08-28 03:38
You bet, my friend ! ::))
You bet, my friend ! ::))
author commentBarbara Writes
Sun, 2011-10-23 14:25
Sorry to hear of your delimna
Give up underwear for depends:( sad that some must choose. I like you sense of humor. I may write I miss my victoria secrets, but don't know if I could get the guts to post on Neopoet. Nicely written though
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Geremia
Sun, 2011-10-23 15:15
:) Stll have them.
:) Stll have them.
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