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Humor in writing workshop- first attempt - Booze Hound

There is an old lush named Booze Hound
When attempting to walk hits the ground
Then pukes and he burps
He goes through the works
causing havoc all the way round 

Editing stage: 


Thank you, i have taken your advise.


Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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