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faded light

The night sky
draws ink from clouds
drifting through
faded light
I am blown away
by empty spaces
falling leaves
and messengers
dressed like angels
with moonlight halos.

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Just love it. Thats all I can say.

Mona
xox

abstract, but I love it! Only one suggestion I'd
make, "moonlit", just an idea.

A pensive mood... I like the imagery!

always, Cat

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