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Every Song

Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head

Can you hear it too

Life has been
like a beautiful Love song
Since I heard the sweet tones
Which flowed from your lips
Making me feel alive once again

My heart now dances
Where before you came
It had forgotten the steps
With you I will stay
Until the end of my days

Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head

It is spring forever
As long as I am with you
I am the tree
And you are the mockingbird
That sings just for me

When ever I need you
Or wish to embrace you
I look to the music
Where I always hear you
Right here in my head

Oh how I love you

Every song I hear
Is related to you
you are the music
That is constantly
Playing in my head

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

I'm just in love and I don't drink. I guess if I did, I would love my pint too, but I am truly intoxicated with Jonette.
Thanks for the read.
Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

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Oh to be in love !!!!!

I enjoyed this poem emensly although it was a little mushy, and romantic, for my usual tastes.. I liked the fact you used a song to evoke your feelings.

Ps does she know about the belt? LMAO!!!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

She has a belt she beats me with. Funny thing is, I like it. LMFAO!!
NO, she does not know anything about the belt joke.
thanks for the read, and comment.
Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

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But this is a fucking superb one.

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

Thanks for the "fucking superb" for you to state that in your comment it means a lot to me. especial the "fucking" that made it one notch higher then superb.
thank you very much!
truth is all I need regardless if sometimes it hurts.

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

author comment

Your love shines through every line! This piece resonates with me, probably because I have the love of my life with me and no matter how long we are together, the time will seem too short. I understand just how you feel!!!

always, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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I am so happy you could relate to this write, it's always a pleasure to see you on my page.

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

author comment

Hey you, thanks for the visit and heart felt comment. See you are Buddy.

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

author comment

Love seems to inspire so much poetry, and it is so nic to have ones peers recognize it.
Thanks Bud, I do appreciate your wonderful comment.

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

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Besides the fact that you eschew punctuation, I still like this a lot. The chorus works. Now, it may be that I'm so stuck on my wife that I was a sucker for the sentimentality of it, but I still like it.
wesley

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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glad you liked it, I am a romantic and will always be.
thanks for the visit.

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

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