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EACH CORNER IS A TURN OF A TURN

EACH CORNER IS A TURN OF A TURN

Life cannot be equated, without this fact
A straight line, is sill straight
As the direction of straight will constantly
Adjust.

Look both ways before you cross the street

See it has its bends
Feel it has its curves
The joinery of life
Has corners, adjusting the
Turns within turns

Corners are chapters
Of a straight line
But each corner may not have a green light
Red should cause you to stop
Look both ways before you decided
Maybe this corner is a turn within a turn
For a straight line

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Interesting title and poem.

always, Cat

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