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The Dialogue
There is meaning to this simple inspiration,
Unimportant I suppose,
Yet it inundates the world,
Can there be so much color in so little space?
There is huge risk in inspiration,
And Yet I implore you think otherwise,
There is no invention without risk,
And can there be invention without innovation?
Then the world will stand here,
And the world shall continue to think,
Yet inspiration will continue to strive,
There will be countless error in inspiration.
Where do we stand then?
We stand where we are,
And yet we continue to go forward,
Only by slowing your pace will one understand inspiration.
Then is inspiration where we stand?
We stand where inspiration is scarce and left to be found by whoever holds color,
Then I take my first step,
Wake up.
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
With this poem I hope to make the reader think about what they interpret inspiration as.
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Comments
scribbler
Sun, 2011-12-04 16:54
Hello and welcome
This poems gives one something to think about. Being unused to thinking, thanks for the headache lol(just kidding). The sources of inspiration are limitless I guess and I look forward to reading the results of your next inspiration..............stan